MAY CHALANGE -- PART TWO -- ADD YOUR SUITABLE LYRICS

 

Complete the haiku/senryu with appropriate verses inspired by this photo. 
Please submit your 2 poems by May 30. 
Let your imagination run wild. Metaphors are welcome. 
 
Please sign your contributions with your full name.  

                                    Happy creative days!

 

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 Take a look at the posts in the first part to see the ones that stand out. Actually, all the poems are good, but I have to mention the ones that stir up more emotion.

 Congratulations to all the participating artists!


 

suddenly darkness - 

 

 1

suddenly darkness - 
so many knots to cut 
one by one

suddenly darkness - 
my problems visible 
so clearly
 
 Urszula Marciniak
 
2
 

suddenly darkness 

now I can see the intertwining

of the starry sky

 

3

 

suddenly darkness –

the resurfacing tangle

of my contradictions
 
 Oscar Luparia
 
4
 
suddenly darkness–
one broken line
holding light
 
 Elliot Diamond
 
 5
 
suddenly darkness -
a nightingale's solo
dares my solitude
 
6
 
suddenly darkness -
the shock of his coming out
and my blindness
 
        
Natalia Kuznetsova 
 
7
 

suddenly darkness -

two serpents entwined

wedding vows

 8

suddenly darkness -

this entanglement

back and forth

 
 Joanna Ashwell
 
9
 

suddenly darkness

the seed starts

to sprout


10

suddenly darkness

lighting a driftwood fire

inside me

 

 Anne Fox

 

 11

suddenly darkness -
I find
a maze

12
suddenly darkness -
twisted roots
in neon 

Katherine E Winnick

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